Topic: Should we close Guantanamo Bay?
Please recreate the following thesis to keep in account the following message. Message will be listed 1st, thesis 2nd.
Message:
Great topic choice! Please note that your thesis statement should not be in the form of the question- rather, it should be a statement setting the stage for the rest of your paper. Instead of asking if closing Guantanamo was in the best interests of American Security, take a stance on the issue. You could say “Closing Guantanamo was not in the best interests of American Security because of XYZ.” You’ll talk about the “XYZ” throughout your paper. You can certainly discuss the other side of the controversy, but your thesis statement should really show the reader what to expect moving forward.
I also don’t see that you included any information for why you chose this topic, the steps you took to get to this topic, and the new things that you learned during the process.
Thesis start:
Was closing Guantanamo in the best interests of American Security?
The detention center in Guantanamo bay has long been a controversial place in the eyes of the international community. In some ways, it had many benefits from a military and security standpoint for the United States, but it also pushed the legal and moral boundaries of United States’ law. As more information was brought to light (aka declassified) the public outcry became larger and more vocal, and international and domestic voices demanded this location be closed. In this paper we will review the decision to close the Guantanamo Bay detention center, and decide if it was in the best interest for American Society.
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